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by todski2809/08/14

smile

this induced a big grin, and a desire to spank you for such naughty thoughts haha

sonics in the first line really grab the reader, followed by well placed line breaks to really keep them there till the "climax"

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by greenmountaineer09/08/14

I liked them all, champ, and the way you handled the transition from PF&D to New Poems, although I admit "BILF" sounds hilarious to me.

This one with the "two-D/photograph" tickled me the most. While you may or may not have intended it, I imagined a daydream of your holding up an 8 1/2 by 11 photograph of Franco, grabbing the glossy paper with both hands by his, and planting a big fat wet kiss on the pic.

I'm wondering if you ever considered stringing them together in one long poem as in I-V? I think that might have suggested there's only one true MILF in the bunch. LOL

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