Hot story. I enjoyed it and look forward to the rest of the tale.
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Anonymous09/08/14
Excellent Story Line!!
Quality writing, great characters and within reality, a very possible scenario ties it all together nicely. This could be a 3-4 or more chapter story line without losing anything.
BRAVO!!! More of this please!
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Anonymous09/09/14
Well done! And a wistful tear...
Terrific story. Powerfully erotic, plausible main story line, nice cliffhanger at the end. Well written. Hope more will follow. Now about that wistful tear...
My wife died last year. In so many ways, she WAS Becca. Same hair color, same eye color, same sexy voice, same incredible tits, same asshole ex-husband whose dick was smaller than mine, same devil-may-care-let's-fuck-anywhere attitude.
Other men wanted her. I was lucky enough to be with her for over twenty years. She took me to heights of ecstasy that I never knew I could reach.
When you write the next chapter, could you arrange for Becca to tit-fuck him in the shower? I have never gotten closer to heaven in this life than when my wife knelt before me as we were covered in soap suds, poured shampoo on my rigid erection, then sandwiched my cock between her 36DDs and allowed me to fuck her cleavage until I couldn't cum any more. Thanks.
Thanks for the memories.....
Very well written, made me jealous and wet all at the same time. Good detail. Would love to read more, after all he has not taken over the back door yet. Going to love reading more of your works. Thank you
I really enjoyed this tale. Will be back for many more. I really like your stuff.
My MOM, was a Red Head, & yes I lusted after her. God she was like Becca in a lot of ways.(thats why I have 2 half siblings giggle lol)
This really was one of the best written stories I've read on this site. The sex was smoking hot but better than that, the author really painted a picture so you could see in your mind's eye what was going on.
im still wondering why her ol man left her. she is obviously hotter than a firecracker, great in bed, hard working,willing to pull part of the financial load,dosent seem bitchy at all, whats not to like here...?????? was he just a clueless dumbass???
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Anonymous04/14/15
Great story and very welll done in all areas!!
Very engrossing. Can't wait to read more.
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Anonymous05/07/15
to jott50
halfway down the first page it says her husband left her for a younger woman.
Great Job
Hot story. I enjoyed it and look forward to the rest of the tale.
Excellent Story Line!!
Quality writing, great characters and within reality, a very possible scenario ties it all together nicely. This could be a 3-4 or more chapter story line without losing anything.
BRAVO!!! More of this please!
Well done! And a wistful tear...
Terrific story. Powerfully erotic, plausible main story line, nice cliffhanger at the end. Well written. Hope more will follow. Now about that wistful tear...
My wife died last year. In so many ways, she WAS Becca. Same hair color, same eye color, same sexy voice, same incredible tits, same asshole ex-husband whose dick was smaller than mine, same devil-may-care-let's-fuck-anywhere attitude.
Other men wanted her. I was lucky enough to be with her for over twenty years. She took me to heights of ecstasy that I never knew I could reach.
When you write the next chapter, could you arrange for Becca to tit-fuck him in the shower? I have never gotten closer to heaven in this life than when my wife knelt before me as we were covered in soap suds, poured shampoo on my rigid erection, then sandwiched my cock between her 36DDs and allowed me to fuck her cleavage until I couldn't cum any more. Thanks.
Thanks for the memories.....
Don' Good !!
Keep up the excellent work.
Wonderful story, looking for part 2
Very well written, made me jealous and wet all at the same time. Good detail. Would love to read more, after all he has not taken over the back door yet. Going to love reading more of your works. Thank you
Hot and arousing!
You definitely like it hot. Wonderfully sexy story. Very pleased to have discovered your treasure trove of stories. Thank you.
Ballgame
Was loving it until the bathroom at the ballgame. Over the top.
Good One!!!
I really enjoyed this tale. Will be back for many more. I really like your stuff.
My MOM, was a Red Head, & yes I lusted after her. God she was like Becca in a lot of ways.(thats why I have 2 half siblings giggle lol)
This really was one of the best written stories I've read on this site. The sex was smoking hot but better than that, the author really painted a picture so you could see in your mind's eye what was going on.
Very Hot!
I enjoyed this one very much. Like another poster, one of the best stories I've read. You are very talented indeed!
One Word!
One word for this one: SMOKING! I can't wait to read the sequel!
wondering
im still wondering why her ol man left her. she is obviously hotter than a firecracker, great in bed, hard working,willing to pull part of the financial load,dosent seem bitchy at all, whats not to like here...?????? was he just a clueless dumbass???
Great story and very welll done in all areas!!
Very engrossing. Can't wait to read more.
to jott50
halfway down the first page it says her husband left her for a younger woman.
Loved it
Great plot, great writing, and great sex. What more could a guy want in a story?
Five stars and then some!
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