Would've been good if you hadn't insulted me at the start
Ok, the line "because I'm bisexual I didn't want commitment" made it very difficult for me to enjoy this. I am bisexual, myself. While I'm used to bisexuals being written unrealistically in erotic fiction, I have never seen anyone be as offensively wrong as to outright say that that a character did not want commitment just because they were bisexual. Most bisexual people, like most straight people and gay people, are perfectly fine with commitment, and will gladly remain faithful to their partner. If you want to write a slutty bisexual character, fine, just don't insult every bisexual person ever in the process. It puts off some potential readers. Like me, for instance. Other than that massive error, this is pretty good.
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oh how i wish that was me
Would've been good if you hadn't insulted me at the start
Ok, the line "because I'm bisexual I didn't want commitment" made it very difficult for me to enjoy this. I am bisexual, myself. While I'm used to bisexuals being written unrealistically in erotic fiction, I have never seen anyone be as offensively wrong as to outright say that that a character did not want commitment just because they were bisexual. Most bisexual people, like most straight people and gay people, are perfectly fine with commitment, and will gladly remain faithful to their partner. If you want to write a slutty bisexual character, fine, just don't insult every bisexual person ever in the process. It puts off some potential readers. Like me, for instance. Other than that massive error, this is pretty good.
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