As always @H-S you manage to transport me into the world you portray, beautifully written with characters who come alive.
The depth of emotions you manage to convey is astounding and to me are what makes a great story.
I look forward to seeing where you take Kitten and Gary next.
5 stars of course!!
Thank you once again, Shysub, for your kind comments. If you liked it, it must be OK!
Magpie, sorry about the short length. Wnen I write my stories, I have an idea about what's going to happen in each episode, and sometimes more words are needed to get there and sometimes fewer. I believe the next several chapters will be longer. Thanks for your comment and your approval.
Hammich, this was a wonderful start. Ain't nothin' wrong with a good damsel/knight story. With just that short bit, you have me invested in the characters. I will see Mel's stars and raise a huzzah!
I'm not sure it's the greatest piece of writing in all of Literotica, not by a long shot, but I surely do appreciate your compliments. Yes, there will be more!
The president of the club seems like a true gentleman; caring, compassionate, putting Kitten's needs before his own. I'm anxious to delve into the rest of the series.
..... to what is an intriguing little story with two pleasing characters. I just found the story and I am so prized that there have been no comments on such an enjoyable piece for over two years now.
Excellent.
As always @H-S you manage to transport me into the world you portray, beautifully written with characters who come alive.
The depth of emotions you manage to convey is astounding and to me are what makes a great story.
I look forward to seeing where you take Kitten and Gary next.
5 stars of course!!
This is a very good story please keep it going but make them longer
Thank you!
Thank you once again, Shysub, for your kind comments. If you liked it, it must be OK!
Magpie, sorry about the short length. Wnen I write my stories, I have an idea about what's going to happen in each episode, and sometimes more words are needed to get there and sometimes fewer. I believe the next several chapters will be longer. Thanks for your comment and your approval.
-HS
quote: The author ... hopes you [enjoy it] and find it worthy of a goodly number of stars.
I did enjoy reading it -- very much, and I have given you all the stars I had to give! Thanks for posting and please bring us more.
Hammich, this was a wonderful start. Ain't nothin' wrong with a good damsel/knight story. With just that short bit, you have me invested in the characters. I will see Mel's stars and raise a huzzah!
Thanks, FA_JF and Mel
As Mark Twain was reported to say, "I can go two weeks on a good compliment." Stand by, Chapter II will be up on Lit in the morning.
This is an excellent beginning and I am looking forwards to more chapters
Thanks you, Premek
Chapter II will be posted tomorrow, and Chapter III is right behind it!
-HS
A Novel?
This has all the makings of a marvelous tale. It may actually be the best intro I've read on Literotica. Awaiting Chap. 2 with bated breath.
Thanks, Catsmine
I'm not sure it's the greatest piece of writing in all of Literotica, not by a long shot, but I surely do appreciate your compliments. Yes, there will be more!
-HS
You're welcome
I said best "intro." This has the potential to supplant "The Vassal Academy" series in my favorites list.
I can't believe
I missed this the first day. A great beginning of what I hope will be a good long tale. I'm so glad that part two is waiting for me!
Yup
Mr late to the party here also thoroughly enjoyed part one.
I particularly liked the self effacing humour ...we Brits do that well..
I'd be hunting this Pluto character with my .357... or maybe a longsword. :P
So wonderful to find a male character in a BDSM story who I can actually relate to. 5/5. Onwards to Ch02!
I'm loving the way this is beginning
The president of the club seems like a true gentleman; caring, compassionate, putting Kitten's needs before his own. I'm anxious to delve into the rest of the series.
Bravo. Really Great Start.....
..... to what is an intriguing little story with two pleasing characters. I just found the story and I am so prized that there have been no comments on such an enjoyable piece for over two years now.
Thanks!
Well, glad you liked it!
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