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I'll try an make the next chapter longer! Is there anything you'd want to see?
kevin finds out the truth beats him up
Please write more!
What's up????
The only thing we have learned from Prom Pt. 01 was "Ellie" is 18, 5'5, slim built with medium length dark brown hair. We still don't even know his name.
More of a back story to "Ellie" would be great.
You're doing great telling the story, but you're going to have to develop "Ellie" more if you really want to hook the readers.
what next?
ok so don t leave me hanging, give me some more about this kid. what happens net for him/her.
huhhuh
Yes more intimate an more how he pulls it off an trys it more often
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