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by dozen12/21/14

Good story but a little bad grammar...

"...seeing Donna and I naked." should be "...seeing Donna and me naked." Would you say "...seeing I naked."? I hope not.

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by niemand199412/25/14

thanks.

I spent a lot of school trying to mentally undress my female classmates. That resulted in a less than flawless mastery of English writing. I just need to edit more.

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by Anonymous01/12/15

Correct grammar?

Donna and I is the correct grammar - at least that is the correct use of the English language in England !!

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