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by Anonymous

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by redlion7509/09/14

why did you stop half way thru?

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by NC2237109/09/14

Slow start, quick finish

Almost like a guy wrote this. Seduction is supposed to be savored, like a fine wine, not gulped like cheap beer.

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what happened...

The story was off to a good start but died abruptly in the end. Perhaps we will see part 2 soon.

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by maddict10/09/14

Perhaps she....

Quick ending no one has aquised me of that before, but I'm no writer.
Marvelled at you choice of cock, not the 9" size of a coke can model. Girl friend you know how to make a guy feel good.
Thanks.

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