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Dear God epic failure
Good storyline. Pathetic grammar. 'Buckle' instead of 'buck'.
'Mary wondered what did he mean'. It's 'what he meant'. Get an editor or just switch to writing in your first language. I'm assuming English is not it.
love it
So hot. Please more
Nice!
Can't wait until next chapter!
liked it
I liked it and can't wait for the next chapter
More!
I love it! Hot as hell itself!
Got To Hand It To The Author
For once the vampire isn't a sex crazed slut or super-stud! Amazing!
As much as the rest of the vampire definition here is modern movie cliche, the not interested in sex makes up for a lot.
Thank you for sharing your work!
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