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Lissane Saga Ch. 01: Meeting Mistress

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by Anonymous

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by mel_pomene09/09/14

A marvellous start!

I look forward so much to reading more. Welcome to Literotica, Broken_Serenity, and thank you for this fascinating beginning to what I am sure will be a fine story.
Please bring us Chapter Two soon! Five stars.

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by Anonymous09/09/14

Inexperienced, albeit youthful 'Mistresses' can remain promising, to submissive male readers?

Bring on your preferred choice, of submissive elderly gents?

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by Anonymous09/12/14

Good start, but a question about technical stuff. Her mouth is duck taped and yet a couple of paragraphs later she is talking?

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