Who Has It Worst?

LETS CHOOSE UP SIDES

and see what shit smells the worst. TK U MLJ LV NV

Enjoyed the boldness and madcap spirit of story more then actual execution

I could see this as modern day Marx brothers movie. It would take a LOT of rewriting though. Props to imhapless for 'trying' to bring this complex farce off though. I was more bemused then amused -Good core idea.

i like it

yeah. i know. improbable at best. but it was fun and entertaining. thank you. 5*'s foe that!

ROTFLMAO ....... Sweet!

Entertaining!
Had a blast reading this totally improbable tale.
Thx!!

Silly, but fun

No real tension in the plot, but a nice idea.

Yup!

You can solve most any problem if you throw enough money at it, and have fun doing it!
A BTB quadfecta! Egregious and yet an enjoyably, satisfying little fantasy fairy tale.
Although obviously no fairy's were hurt in the taleing.

Fun . . .

. . . don't look too deep into details on this one, it's just a fun read for male fantasies. Even I liked it. Pretty fair job of comic writing.

Best of 2014

Great story fast paced no wasted words and kept the reader enthralled to the very end. A fan of your story library and eagerly awaiting your next tale.

Utterly implausible (~smile)

but a great read!

Amusingly wacko

Broke his back? Really? Would rate higher if it was actually erotic.

Really, really fun to read

I was thoroughly entertained, and isn't that what this is about? 5*

That was just good fun

Thanks.

Lots of fun!

Unfortunately virtually unbelievable but I like fantasies...

Very good story...

Very good story, good reading, refreshing and funny. Thank you

Well done

I won't talk about the realism. I can't think if a single thing I would complain about. Just a fun little tale bordering the fantastic, a paen to the idea of friendship lifting all boats.

Thank you for a tale worth reading today.

Very entertaining! 5*

-V

Good story

Thanks for helping to end the "loving wives" category drought".

Damn near the perfect revenge fantasy

Damn near the perfect revenge fantasy! Coincidence does happen so something like this is not beyond the realm of possibility, which only makes it better.

A damn good read

While not quite plausible, it was a good tale, and an interesting storyline.

Thanks for the read.

Could have put it in humor

But I'm glad you posted it here. Lots of stars!

BTB

YOU ARE THE BEST 100 STARS

Cartoonish

But that's not a bad thing. Though highly improbable, it was novel and very entertaining. Most BTB stories are immature. This one was just over the top fun.

Not one...not two...not three...but FOUR!

Four bitches burned to the ground! Hoorah!

What a hoot!

Sometimes, BTB is just plain fun!

Besides, like almost everyone else, "I've got a little list..."

Can't say it better than rjordan

Good clean (okay, maybe not clean) fun.

genuine slapstick humour

too much, too far, too funny. just as it was meant to be.

if there is anything I would change it would be that Julie ended up better off in the end than any of the other cheaters. Stan could have found someone compatible that was not part of the "worst" brigade.

every group of fellows

has one Forrest Gump, Stan was theirs 5*

SWEET!!!

Can't beat a humorous BTB party!

****

Now that was different. Good story. Absurd and humorous. Cheers!

Sometimes You Want To Get Lost*****

In a story this was one entertaining story. Thanks for sharing this DAMN!! good story.

Great Tale

It seems that all the men in the got what they wanted. Excellent revenge against the cheaters and although one of them has a happily ever after, they all had severe consequences thrust upon them. Score one for the betrayed husbands, all are happy.

Five Stars

Enjoyed it

An interesting storyline, but many of the details were glossed over. Not quite sure what Tom's wife's lie could have been - must have been a whopper to get her arrested.

Many wrongly say 360 when meaning 180. If someone does a 360 they do a full circle and are in the same direction that they started.

Amy's probable lie

Was probably that there had been nothing going on between her and Jeremy that would explain the children's emotional states other than an unprovoked attack on her innocent "visitor" by the nanny (the nanny's account of the incident was probably something along the lines of the eight year old running out of her mother's bedroom while the six year old was still in there screaming about a strange man "hurting her mommy," and using a fry pan on a presumed rapist).

Entertaining BTB Foursome

All is now happy in the jungle. Well done!

Fun read

I'd like to know which drug interaction "caused" Audrey, Jack's wife, to become a nymphomaniac and slut around. Researchers have been searching for such a concoction for many years. Males have used alcohol, but it's tough to use. Too little and it doesn't work; too much and she just falls asleep.

Most guys don't want a date rape charge, so screwing a very drunk woman (unless she's your wife) is perhaps risky, and little fun if she just sleeps through it all without responding. And if she is your wife, then the vomiting and other hangover consequences tend to be messy. Not to mention the sharp tongue and inevitable punishment that follows (I.e., lack of sex for quite a while).

Despite being quite a stretch, the story was original and there were few writing errors. A nice change of pace from the typical cuckold wimp fare that has become awfully plentiful in Loving Wives of late. BTB is thus refreshing and can't wait for more from this author. Four stars, thanks for writing.

Harmless fantasy ....

... though it says some unfortunate things about the few who like the story as a representation of things as they ought to be

When I look at this sub-list and for some reason a story catches my eye that is pure BTB if l continue it is to see how many felonies the protagonist commits in the course of obtaining "justice"

Surreptitious video recording is a felony in all the states so long as one has a reasonable expectation of privacy, and there are cases that hold that the adulterer in his/her home has such an expectation; truth be told, so does his/her partner, but I haven't read any decisions where that was a key point. And then there were countless other felonies such as obstruction of justice, perjury, suborning perjury and god knows how many counts of conspiracy.

I'd give a life time 5 star pass to any author who was bright and energetic enough to write a sold BTB without depending on a handful of crimes to make it work - dei ex machina, so to speak.

Fun story

A bit unbelievable, but a great tale. I laughed all the way through. Thanks

Awesome fantastic story.

Although, completely implausible this was fun. It worked for me at anyrate. Great inventive writing!

Phil2213 said it all

Really good & enjoyable read.

Loved it

BTB and RAAC who could argue with that!!

imhappiness

Gotta say, imh, that this was one of the most clever stories posted to Literotica.

Just look at the list of commentators and consider that normally we could not agree on whether or not the sun rises in the west or sets in the east. Yet almost every commentator enjoyed this story.

Terrific writing!

Enjoyable Fantasy!

Yes, I enjoyed this story. I liked the fact of the four guys helping each other solve their marital problems. It was a fun and humorous read. I don't know how realistic but it was an enjoyable fantasy. Thanks for writing an original and creative story.

A fun romp

Sure it was a bit cartoonish, but I like all the guy bonding and support system. A true bromance, and a very enjoyable read.

Guys Rule,Cunts Drool!

Finally! Nice to see guys defeating the dumb-shit,pussy-favored DIVORCE Rules,and winning for a change!

ANY BODY CAN WIN ANY TIME

all you need is moxie and money and balls. TK U MLJ LV NV

This was an enjoyable story...

Sort of a "Strangers On a Train" but where the people getting "done" definitely deserve it.

Only negative I saw was setting up a situation where the kids could and likely would walk in on their mother engaging in sex...

Sure, its possible that little exposure was likely to damage them less than living with her as a mother would have done, it's just kind of problematic whether it was the kind of thing a father would be ok with...

And Stan ending up with Julie was odd... there she was sort of being rewarded though she did effectively get FORCED to be faithful for a decade - that was a weird bit of justice all things considered...

And I might add...

that was really fun!

Great big five!

terrific!

Jedd Clampett

5 Stars

Very well written