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Fucked In Every Hole by Strangers

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by Anonymous

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by swingerjoe09/10/14

Solid first effort

It's more of a description of a sex scene than a complete story. It ended just when it was getting interesting.

Not a bad first effort, though. Keep writing. In general, I try not to start writing a story until I know how it will end. This one cries out for an ending.

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Agreed.

More please! I liked it a LOT...

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