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Solid first effort
It's more of a description of a sex scene than a complete story. It ended just when it was getting interesting.
Not a bad first effort, though. Keep writing. In general, I try not to start writing a story until I know how it will end. This one cries out for an ending.
Agreed.
More please! I liked it a LOT...
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