...or don't. You've done nothing in this tiny fragment to intrigue any but the most desperately bored reader. Why even submit this?
by
Anonymous09/13/14
More please!
Ignore anon below because I'd definitely love to read more! There are so many possibilities hinted here and I can't wait to find out how this story develops x
This is a story in three parts. The third is pending approval still, but here are the links.
www.literotica.com/s/masquerade-pt-02
www.l iterotica.com/s/masquerade-pt-03
by
Anonymous09/15/14
Excellent Writing But...
The writing is excellent but instead of posting this as a three part story you would have done better to post it as one longer story.
This was originally written and posted on another site. I wrote it in parts hence the three-part story. I suppose I could have combined it when submitting here, but I wasn't sure if it would have been too long.
by
Anonymous09/23/14
Yawn
Yup too long and boring. You would do well to not try so damn hard.
English
finish it!!!
...or don't. You've done nothing in this tiny fragment to intrigue any but the most desperately bored reader. Why even submit this?
More please!
Ignore anon below because I'd definitely love to read more! There are so many possibilities hinted here and I can't wait to find out how this story develops x
This story is three parts.
This is a story in three parts. The third is pending approval still, but here are the links.
www.literotica.com/s/masquerade-pt-02
www.l iterotica.com/s/masquerade-pt-03
Excellent Writing But...
The writing is excellent but instead of posting this as a three part story you would have done better to post it as one longer story.
This was originally written and posted on another site. I wrote it in parts hence the three-part story. I suppose I could have combined it when submitting here, but I wasn't sure if it would have been too long.
Yawn
Yup too long and boring. You would do well to not try so damn hard.
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