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I felt this whole thing didn't need to be split in to chapters, the first 2 are less than a page as it is. It was rushed and no real substance.
I say write how you want to write. If everyone did everything the same......well life what be boring.
What's next?
What a wonderful experience
The seduction was long and your marketing was very cleaver, two tantalizers and a grand finale !
Thank you
Thank you for the support and encouraging me to write how I like. I know I can't please everyone, and I don't necessarily write stories for those who are just looking for one thing out of them.
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