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Not a bad start at all. I hope you continue this series.
I plan to
I really plan on it. Didn't want to have too much sex in the first so I could set up the story before I go crazy with it. Glad you enjoyed it!
Sincerely,
LazyNinjas
Wording
Almost every sentence has 'Richard' at the beginning. Wasn't fun to read.
satisfied
I have always enjoyed this type of mind control, the sadistic side of me likes the girls to know what's happening to them. I am excited to see more, so much so that I have decided to comment for the first time ever on any literotica story. I would like to see a chapter with either Emma Watson or Karen Gillan in it, but I am satisfied with whoever you decide to throw in.
I'm going to post a shorter story that will be placed between ch. 1 and 2 as soon as I can. Thanks for enjoying my work.
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