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by Anonymous

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by baikalisan09/12/14

Nice beginning

Will there be more ?

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by peachfuzz6909/12/14

There should be more

I'm hooked. I want more

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by MADISONKAI09/12/14

5

Enthralled...please don't end it here.

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by CaveCat1240109/12/14

Excellent

Original.
Something special from a very talented writer.

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by 63lsmith09/12/14

VERY NICE

Yes very nice indeed, the intro. was a little long. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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by Anonymous09/12/14

Shouldnt

I loved this version. Delicious flow.

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by Gene6309/12/14

Loved it!!! Please continue!!! I want more of these two.

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by coolhand6969209/13/14

Brilliant

Love the style, looking forward to more!

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by TimothyM09/13/14

Resting temptation for so long made him fall even harder. But I hope it turns out to be love and not just lust. At least there are no legal or moral difficulties now.

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by Anonymous09/29/14

Liar

That was amzing for being "bare bone version"

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by Anonymous10/16/14

Bravo!!!

Beautifully written! Love the slow build, detail and imagery. Hope you continue to write more, so talented!

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by Anonymous12/29/14

yikes!

What a stupid teacher who could not see through the plot to get into his pant. I would have report him in the first place let him loose his scholarship..let alone let him into my house...what a brat.

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