Very sweet and sexy!
Can't wait for Ch. 2 keep it up
delete and wait until you have a REAL story to post as is this was a waste of time. you need to make this atleast three times longer with more background, detail and character development.
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Nice!
Very sweet and sexy!
Cant wait
Can't wait for Ch. 2 keep it up
WAY TOO SHORT
delete and wait until you have a REAL story to post as is this was a waste of time. you need to make this atleast three times longer with more background, detail and character development.
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