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My First Kiss

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by Anonymous

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by Averygoodlay10/03/14

Very hard to read

Had to stop reading as it was hard to keep track of what was he saying.

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by Anonymous10/03/14

Give it up!

I too found it difficult to read.
Please English learn before you compose try to story a!!!!!!!!!

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by Anonymous10/04/14

Waste of Time!

Get someone to proof read your story before having it posted. Spellchecker works wonders, try it!

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by Anonymous10/20/14

i love this story

I really like this story

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