Had to stop reading as it was hard to keep track of what was he saying.
I too found it difficult to read. Please English learn before you compose try to story a!!!!!!!!!
Get someone to proof read your story before having it posted. Spellchecker works wonders, try it!
I really like this story
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Very hard to read
Had to stop reading as it was hard to keep track of what was he saying.
Give it up!
I too found it difficult to read.
Please English learn before you compose try to story a!!!!!!!!!
Waste of Time!
Get someone to proof read your story before having it posted. Spellchecker works wonders, try it!
i love this story
I really like this story
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