Saving a Lost Kitten Ch. 03

Awesome

This story is good. It has good pacing, atmosphere and dialogue.
I will be looking forward to the next parts.

Thank you, FB!

I appreciate your taking the time to comment on it. More will be coming soon!

-HS

Warming up nicely

Being more M/f oriented, I do hope that's where you're heading. The back story is coming out at just the right rate to keep it interesting, too. Carry on!

Thanks, Catsmine

M/f is where it'll eventually conclude, but there will be a few twists and turns along the way! Thanks for reading!

-HS

Another yummy taste. You are pacing this just right. As short as the chapters are, you have a lot of story progress in each one with rushing things. You are edging us readers very nicely, keeping us wanting more.

Super!!

Just brilliant as always H-S, not sure what else to say apart from 'please can we have chapter 4 soon, pretty please!'
5 sparkling stars with sprinkles and cherries......

Thanks, Shysub!

Sprinkles AND cherries, I'm gonna get fat!

-HS

Another 5 stars

Perfect mmmmmm !!!!!

Another nice one

You're great at teasing, and delivering just the right amount of naughtiness as a reward for our patience. Keep 'em coming!

Thank you, ladies!

Thanks, Irishlass for the fiver. And thanks as always, Serafina, for your encouragement, which is always welcome, coming as it is from an "A"-list writer like yourself. I must confess, it's not my intention to be a teaser, I have a vision of where the story will end up, but sometimes the way to get there isn't as well defined, so I have to take it in small portions!

-HS

Nice humour

And a nice gentle pace to go with it.
One crit after three chapters.
You've not got enough length..!!
I know that's a man thing and we all want longer and bigger, but you really do need to improve your size. Bigger is always more satisfying ...or so they say.:-))

Sorry, Jim

I used to be longer when I was younger. ;-)

-HS