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Stephen Lyons MD Ch. 01

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by C_frommn09/14/14

Nice Start

But with Stephen getting educated and prosperous. You would think his Grandma would come snooping around. Not to mention People who were either hurtful or un-tolerant of either her or him would be in his sights.

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by geesy33309/15/14

I liked it but its abit too fast...its like the summary of the entire plot....there are may things that could have been expanded into a chapter of its own.....i look forward to better storytelling in the future...none the less keep up the good work....cheers.

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