Stephen Lyons MD Ch. 01

Nice Start

But with Stephen getting educated and prosperous. You would think his Grandma would come snooping around. Not to mention People who were either hurtful or un-tolerant of either her or him would be in his sights.

I liked it but its abit too fast...its like the summary of the entire plot....there are may things that could have been expanded into a chapter of its own.....i look forward to better storytelling in the future...none the less keep up the good work....cheers.