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Not a bad story
This has potential.
Excellent debut
Man, I really can't stand the whiny little bitches who complain about every fucking story in this category that involves a wife having extra-marital fun (you know, as the fucking category's description describes!?)
Please, author, ignore these mouth-breathing imbeciles. This is a FANTASY. It's fucking FICTION. Every time one of these morons criticizes the morality of the fictional characters in a story, I can't help but imagine sitting behind them in a movie theater and becoming increasingly irritated as they shout at the screen.
End rant.
As for this story, I thought it was well-written and well-developed for such a short story. There are more than a few cliches sprinkled in there, from tying up hubby while wifey fucks some young stud, to having him watch the action on a hidden camera, to -- of course -- the Literotica standard-issue ten-inch dick. But as a first-time author, we shouldn't expect you to reinvent Shakespeare. It's a fucking porn story site, after all.
Keep writing, please. And feel free to delete all the idiotic comments from the Bitter Old Man Club.
Angry Old Man
You get my 5 stars!
It was good until the end.
When a married couple become a Domme and a sub, the dynamics change too greatly to be considered a partnership without a lot of thought and effort going into it.
Good beginning!
The flow of the story was entertaining and fun. You did a B job on your descriptors, you gave good details and used the readers senses. The story line was good and well thought out. The combination of BDSM in this roll is fun. Thank you for the fun story. Looking forward to the next story.
Entertaining, liked the story a good bit
I quibble with the unrealistic aspect of the wife picking up in the grocery store, being so forward, I guess it is possible for some gregarious outgoing women. The no condom thing, with a virtual stranger, wow, and then the creampie cleanup, all seems a bit much for a true story but you did say it was an amalgam of truth and fiction.
Good first story. 4
Hot!!
Not sure how much I can say as I'm just working on my first story to post. Always love a story from the woman's perspective on this subject. I thought it was well written and conveyed a fun story albeit a bit short. That of course is a compliment though as I wanted to read more. The details and desciptors that allow one to imagine the scenario are the reason I like the written version of things. I'd say a great first story and I look forward to reading more!!
A good story until now...
A good story until now...Let's hope it keeps like this, and that she doesn't lost herself and her love for her husband in the process...
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