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Ode to The Cage

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/15/14

No

Some people are readers. Some are writers. Some do both. You should solely be a reader.

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by Anonymous09/15/14

nice

I enjoyed it. As a submissive girl, I'd prefer a little more embellishment in the scenario, but this was good overall.

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by Mesexyunot09/16/14

Good writing

Look forward to reading more of your stories.

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by Anonymous10/26/14

Sorry, Darling!

This story is crappy. There was no story line whatsoever, and the words you use are a terrible choice. You just can't write stories, simple as that.

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