Some people are readers. Some are writers. Some do both. You should solely be a reader.
I enjoyed it. As a submissive girl, I'd prefer a little more embellishment in the scenario, but this was good overall.
Look forward to reading more of your stories.
This story is crappy. There was no story line whatsoever, and the words you use are a terrible choice. You just can't write stories, simple as that.
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Some people are readers. Some are writers. Some do both. You should solely be a reader.
nice
I enjoyed it. As a submissive girl, I'd prefer a little more embellishment in the scenario, but this was good overall.
Good writing
Look forward to reading more of your stories.
Sorry, Darling!
This story is crappy. There was no story line whatsoever, and the words you use are a terrible choice. You just can't write stories, simple as that.
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