This story has lots of potential. I like the little 1 and 2 page short story format, but always leaving a cliffhanger. Between Mom, Dad, Justine, and all their buddies, you've got a bunch of potential. ---Jedd
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great job
This story has lots of potential. I like the little 1 and 2 page short story format, but always leaving a cliffhanger. Between Mom, Dad, Justine, and all their buddies, you've got a bunch of potential. ---Jedd
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