i still dont get how she was accepted so easily into a yakuza family enough to marry into it.much less have all of this "respect" being shown to her by the rest of the families.
feels like i missed MONTHS in their lives ... o.o like... man i was feeling this story in the beginning until you rushed everything ;l
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Anonymous10/14/14
otsukaresama
you have captured the flavor/essence exquisitely
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Anonymous12/29/14
The only issue I have with your story is that because it isn't numbered, you don't know where to begin or what follows on. I started on chapter three but figured out what went where.
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oooooooooooooooh
Is Hana going to wake from a beautiful dream into a horrific reality??? Her life seems like a fairy tale right down to killing Martin :D
Please don't let anything else go wrong...at least for a while.
i still dont get how she was accepted so easily into a yakuza family enough to marry into it.much less have all of this "respect" being shown to her by the rest of the families.
huh...did i miss something?
feels like i missed MONTHS in their lives ... o.o like... man i was feeling this story in the beginning until you rushed everything ;l
otsukaresama
you have captured the flavor/essence exquisitely
The only issue I have with your story is that because it isn't numbered, you don't know where to begin or what follows on. I started on chapter three but figured out what went where.
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