All Comments on 'My Igloo'

by Wildestthang

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

I liked the change of scenery in your story and the passion between these characters. if i may, up until the part where you mention getting the main character getting her partner' s cock out of those pants, i could imagine the partner as a woman or as a man. In general, it would be just a bit more special of a story if you had added a few details about the relationship between these two, like nicknames they use for each other or something particulad about the clothing or skin or smell of each person.

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