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by mel_pomene09/16/14

Congrtulations!

And welcome to Literotica, Winidou. It is good to have a new writer with us and I enjoyed your début story. The only advice I can offer you is, now you have started, to keep writing -- every day if you can.

No-one, not even Stephen King or Neil Gaiman knows everything about writing; you must find your own voice and your own way. That is more than many of us could hope for.

Well done -- four stars.

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by Anonymous09/16/14

I love it

The only complaint I have is I want to read more! Please keep the story going!!!

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by fishingrod4809/16/14

Great Start

Well done this. I cannot wait for the next installment.

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by jengx409/17/14

Fabulous first story!! I am going to need more though.

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