While toilet play is not my kink, this story could change that! Raw, dirty, erotic words, written so beautifully, as always. Your skills as a writer, along with the depths of your kink, come together to once again to tell a unique and erotic tale that could only come from you, Plusher.
thank you JAH...always a pleasure to have your views
this is a new thing for me, i'm working with a mentor at present; a r/t Dominant who also happens to be a prolific writer. He sends me images or the bones of a scenario for inspiration, i then weave a story around the original concept and he gives me a critique. This piece in this form is pre-critique, i knew he loved it but his polishing is sublime; i may well re-submit once i've tweaked so look out for an edit.
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While toilet play is not my kink, this story could change that! Raw, dirty, erotic words, written so beautifully, as always. Your skills as a writer, along with the depths of your kink, come together to once again to tell a unique and erotic tale that could only come from you, Plusher.
thank you JAH...always a pleasure to have your views
this is a new thing for me, i'm working with a mentor at present; a r/t Dominant who also happens to be a prolific writer. He sends me images or the bones of a scenario for inspiration, i then weave a story around the original concept and he gives me a critique. This piece in this form is pre-critique, i knew he loved it but his polishing is sublime; i may well re-submit once i've tweaked so look out for an edit.
edited version now live
This is the new and improved edit, after input from my mentor
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