All Comments on 'The Hotel Room Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Perfection

That was really intense! I hope you continue the night, because you did so very good on the beginning. Nothing seems cheap or implausable, it all just comes together, makes great sense and invokes a vivid pictures of the action in the dark!

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