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by todski2809/18/14

your timing and line breaks

always impress me, the white space always seems to be in the right place to tease you along to reading all the way through. I fived because I did not see any hint of the misdirection to the ending, and your story telling and rhyme structure uplifted this to a great read.

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by Ashesh909/19/14

I turned my back 'pon this treasure chest

.......desires if my earlier ages
Gold 'n silver
...........
Wisdom if sages


Lived'n loved these lines , Magnet :5- ed !

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