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Nice start
Nice but please don't stop now!
if her room is on the 2nd floor why did she go to the 4th?
Where does it say her room is on the second floor?
I'm not seeing that.
that's it?
Sorry
Sorry about anything that's not following through in the story. Its my first smut writing. Normally I just do non-erotic stories so I'm focused on things other than consistency. But sorry again. And I posted today. Just waiting for the moderator to approve it.
Why???
If you are going to write something, put some 'meat on the bone'....no puns intended.
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