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perfect sentiments
capped with a killer final line, loved the use of shopping list, and writing a list poem clever. 5ed
Thank you OldBear
I do so love your perspective, and agree completely with Todski, that last line is a killer wrap up.
Thanks Todski
This is a rip off of Trixie's Wheels poem - she did it first and a lot more cleverly...
I knew that
they were too similar thematically, though you think trix did it better blah, blah
it is a great contrast of masculine and feminine writing.
And just add Amen to your
Shoppin' List Oldbear : jus' hope every man is so lucky ! 5-ed.
THE OLD ADAGE; SAVE THE BEST FOR LAST
is not 100% fool-proof. TK U MLJ LV NV
A healthy shopping list
That is a good list of staples
Beautifully written
Thoroughly enjoyed the read
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