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3 Families Vol. 01 Ch. 08

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by Anonymous09/19/14

Perfect

Keep up the good work this story is one of the best I can't wait for vol.2

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by Anonymous09/19/14

please don't keep us in suspense over long!

This first volume has been the most entertaining read I've encountered since WillIAm's Our Story, on Hentai Foundry. Please don't keep us waiting months for volume 2!

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by Jedd1109/21/14

please continue

I really enjoyed this as I like a slow buildup. But after 8 chapters I do hope you get around to some actual sexual encounters. All we've gotten is a blow job by Nicolette on Alex, and a couple fondlings that were always cut short. The journey is a big part of getting there, perhaps even the best part, but eventually you do want to get there. Please don't make us wait too long.

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by Anonymous01/02/16

mix feelings

This is turning into more of an amazing novel with unheard of character development so many writers lack. I teared up and felt real emotions during the crash. Unexpected but amazing. LOn the other hand i cringe at the moments of unrealness that happen a lot. Alex busting on his mom when she just so happens to walk in, the nursing at the beginning and the after work out massage.. You're better than that. Some things are just cheap. You add them as a fan service but honestly at this point i just want a good story

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