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Keeping Up With the Joneses Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/17/14

OMG I LOOOOOVE YOU!!!! YOU JUST POPPED UP AND STOLE THE SHOW YAAAAASSSS!!!! ..yes I'm this excited when I see a new chapter from you on any of them ugh

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by Cherrypeach09/17/14

Simply the best

I've fallen head over heels in love. My heart actually fluttered while reading this story. Sigh....... Moan.... Giggle...... Gasp.......sigh......smile. Your stories are outstanding. You're one of my favorites now. I adore Dylan and his total devotion to Prissy. I wish I had such a monster under and in my bed. 👏👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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by Khamalani09/17/14

Too cute

I don't see Dylan as a monster. Control freak maybe. But he loves his Prissy. They are adorable!! Another good story!! You've become my favorite author in record time!!

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by redlion7509/17/14

how does his mom feel about how he got prissy

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by bearslady09/17/14

Nice

Nice, hot sequel to a hot original piece. Well done

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This is probably the best line I've read all year, "red velvet with cream cheese icing, southern girl kryptonite". As a true southern girl I can attest to the validity of this statement.

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by Anonymous09/18/14

They are an indescribable couple, in a good way. The way Dylan withheld those cupcakes from.her was ridiculous, but I loved her reaction when she was told the reason fir them being in the fridge. Great up payee. How far along is Prissy? Does she still work? I'm.eagerly awaiting the next chapter in this saga.

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by beautifulreader09/18/14

Love it!

I've read and enjoyed your other works, but this is just perfect! I love the bdsm aspect of it and they are awesome together. The sex is fire, but I would like to see some emotional development. How does Prissy really feel about her new husband and baby? It all happened so fast, she has to be somewhat hesitant. Will she continue to work? And how exactly do Dylan and Prissy love each other? Just some things I'm interested in seeing but other than that, your story is great! Keep it up!

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by KittyOh4809/19/14

Cake, Cupcake, creamcheese icing.....Yeah you got me also!

Can I have a monster like that? Your description of the cupcakes, had me wet! You are right, you know "US SOUTHERN GIRLS!" I love this story, I would love more backstory on the couple, but I will take what I can get!
ILovethisstory!

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by cuteButSexy21809/19/14

Great Job!

I really love this couple and I am very happy you are continuing on. The trap was awesome and well played. With a sweet and spice of sexy seduction was a wonderful touch.

Please post soon :D

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You had me at red velvet cupcake

That was some freaky shit with the event knife, but the rest I loved!! More please!

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by ladiebrowneyez09/21/14

my goodness

now i'm hungry and i don't want a cupcake, more stories pls ;[

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by ncpecanpie09/22/14

Love It

I loved Monster Behind the Desk and was so happy to stumble upon this. Combination of interracial and domination. I wouldn't worry about the "low" rating. It's a great story! And yes I want a cupcake.

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by chocolatesista09/23/14

Another Hit!

I love all your stories so much. Great job!

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by stepsonic01/27/15

So cute

Such a cute story! I like the cupcake material

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by Anonymous06/18/15

Excellent!

Great pace, humor and sexy as hell!

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by Msljlilly10/05/16

Amazing

I re-read all of your stories occasionally. They are absolutely awesome.

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