Teaching Kaylea

There were a few typos.

These were a few I found -
“… Kaylea shook her head. "I can't breath," she said …” - ‘breathe’!
“… enjoying the feel of her pert, supply breasts before running my hand …” - ‘supple’!
“It took three threes before it happened.” - ‘tries’?
Apart from those though, a very good story.

Thanks Anon. I've submitted an edited version that fixes those typos!

Nice

Good story ... well written, and typos do happen to everyone ... keep it up ...

they need a better grading system

I say that because giving you a 4 for this story would be a travesty. The beginning was fantastic, the tease the buildup the foreshadowing etc. I also enjoyrd the initial pace of the sex, again the buildup.

The end felt a little rushed but after 3 pages you may have been tired. Either way I think a 5 would be a smidgen too much. So in my grading system you would get a 4.5, really good but not WOW.

Great story. Always a big fan of your stories in all genres. Keep them coming

Nice!

I have been lucky enough to have mentors in my life, including sexual ones. Thank Goodness! From speaking to women about this subject for more than 30 years, I have come to the same conclusion most of them have come to: We (Most Men) SUCK at pleasing a woman in bed! A joke from the 70's will illustrate: "How do you tell when a woman has an orgasm?" A: "Who gives a crap?" How sad, gentlemen! How sad.