A lady with a great story to tell. In all honesty I didn't spot an error. But I wasn't looking too hard. I was more interested in the development of their friendship . I am looking forward to Chapter two.
Thanks Don
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Anonymous09/18/14
Great
Great start. Wish it had gone further and I hope when it does that she doesn't get all guilty and back away.
I like getting feedback, public or private. I've submitted part 2 so it should be posted before long. I expected that would finish the story but it took on a life of it's own and there will be a third part, at least.
Feel free to comment. Thanks again.
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Anonymous09/19/14
great read
It reminds me of my brother's affair with his friend's mom. She was 48 years old and he was 31 years old. He seduced her and had sex., they never used protection and he knocked her up. Toddler is now 30 months old and her hubby still thinks he is the daddy.
This is a good story. I wish I had a good friend's mom that looked like you, cause I would flirt with you and try to get you into bed like your son's friend does.
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Anonymous09/21/14
keep it up.... You had mine up...
cant help imagine that you are deb and that this is a true experience... Realistic and loving the story... Cant wait to read other chapters....
I don't even play online with any man under 40. Younger men, though fun to fantasize about, are far too close to my sons' ages. I love the fantasy though...
That is how all sexual connections (mental or physical) should begin. And your mind guided your writing along sutch a simulating route. As for playing on line, I'm 80 and we just did! THANKS
English
This has potential
This has started out nice. Please continue.
WOW!!!
A lady with a great story to tell. In all honesty I didn't spot an error. But I wasn't looking too hard. I was more interested in the development of their friendship . I am looking forward to Chapter two.
Thanks Don
Great
Great start. Wish it had gone further and I hope when it does that she doesn't get all guilty and back away.
Love Has No Bar
The beginning and the progress of the story is great....quite interesting and gripping...
continue....
WhoreBD
Thanks***
For the read.
Thanks
Good read. Ignore Anony-mouse he's seldom had a positive word.
well done
looking forward to next chapter
Thank you for your comments!
I like getting feedback, public or private. I've submitted part 2 so it should be posted before long. I expected that would finish the story but it took on a life of it's own and there will be a third part, at least.
Feel free to comment. Thanks again.
great read
It reminds me of my brother's affair with his friend's mom. She was 48 years old and he was 31 years old. He seduced her and had sex., they never used protection and he knocked her up. Toddler is now 30 months old and her hubby still thinks he is the daddy.
Loved the story
Great story, too short. Loving the direction it's going in. Can't wait for part 2, 3, 4....Keep up the good work.
Great job!
I'm enjoying this, keep up the great work!
My Gosh
This is a good story. I wish I had a good friend's mom that looked like you, cause I would flirt with you and try to get you into bed like your son's friend does.
keep it up.... You had mine up...
cant help imagine that you are deb and that this is a true experience... Realistic and loving the story... Cant wait to read other chapters....
Just a fantasy
I don't even play online with any man under 40. Younger men, though fun to fantasize about, are far too close to my sons' ages. I love the fantasy though...
Thanks for the comments. I like reading them.
Mmmm! But what a great fantasy!
That is how all sexual connections (mental or physical) should begin. And your mind guided your writing along sutch a simulating route. As for playing on line, I'm 80 and we just did! THANKS
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