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by Ashesh909/18/14

Power play is my life's blood

I'm such a whore ..........
Total Power Exchange seems to be your raison de etre ........these words , lines .....whatever are very BD & SM :Faved 'n 5-ed !

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by Apple_of_Eden09/19/14

Welcome! A Poem with feeling.

Welcome! Your poem is a nice first "submission." It reads with a lot of feeling. Your poem's sub, shouldn't feel she/he is "losing your will to fight." She/he should give it to the Dom/Domme as a gift. Give it freely and reap from their acceptance of it.

Keep writing. Can't wait to read your next work.

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