Stewart, Neema and Mike

stories of the mentally ill arent erotic

dead wives don't lie

Dumb__Hubbie

Take a long walk on a short pier.

Here's what you do...

She's the breadwinner? Easy. Make sure she's well-insured.
Then put a little C-4 under the hood of his car while they're at the dinner.
You can keep the kids and the house and get a nice call girl to suck your dick once a month, if that's all you need.
"Everybody is not going to know"? Everybody already knows, by the way Steward manhandles her on the dance floor.
She "appears" to have feelings for him? Why, because she threw him a bone and called him "Darling", for the neighbors to hear as she opened the door to go out with her lover?
Nah, she just tolerates him so he stays home and takes care of the kids, giving her a veneer of respectability.
Yes, I did read it was a story about a submissive, cuckolded husband. We know two couples who practice cuckoldry, and we can tell the wives love their husbands by the way they treat them, and we know they still have sex with them, because we can hear the sounds when walking the dogs late at night.
But I felt no love from the wife in this story. She may as well have been swatting a fly as dealing with her husband, an obvious annoyance to her. There was no teasing, no letting him help her get ready, no affection, no giving him something to do while she was gone, no verbal humiliation to turn him on. There were so many things she could have done to indulge her submissive husband's needs, but she would have to love him to do that.
Being a good Dominant can be hard work (ask my husband); it requires talking to your submissive, figuring out what they need, and planning how to give them their kind of pleasure. Unfortunately, too many submissive husbands of cuckoldresses just get ordered around, neglected, or handed off to the bull for a good fucking. They may be submissive, but they have not married Dommes; their wives are just incredibly selfish women who really don't know how to love anybody. (For further delineation, read xleglover's depictions of "Jenn".)
Just another despicable cuckoldress, not a loving wife.

Dear last anonymous

I didn't read the story. I am not into the whole 'cuckolding' fetish. I prefer dramatic stories.

But let me just compliment you on your post. While alternative lifestyles are not my cup of tea, your post was able to shine a light on how these relationships can flourish with proper boundaries. Wife is going out to get laid? She makes sure hubby is FULLY ON BOARD, and she treats him with respect, love and affection. She makes sure he has a wonderful dinner and that it's on the night that the Eagles are going to get their asses handed to them so he will be mentally engaged. Maybe she hires an escort to stop by for him. It is a bonding process, not some one way highway.

Now, that would not work for me, though I can see the 'selfless' touches (mostly on the sub's part). But while I believe they are more difficult, that doesn't mean they are impossible. People are strange and they need to find what works for them.

How do I say this?

Creative writing is not something you are good at. No harm in trying but be advised.

crap

If he hates it so much I see some revenge coming....Stewarts wife finds out and Mike gets paid, Then he dumps the bitch

Slag

Cut your losses and kick her out, he should have taken the kids to the venue where she was meeting her lover and showed them what a slut she was.

now that's a warning

I gave you a 3 for giving a real fucking warning. I didn't read this but I'm glad you gave us a view in to the life a sick cuckold with a warning of what was fourth coming.

Cuckold

Literotica needs to have a completely separate area for this crap.

Keep going

You warned people that they might not like the content, so let them go fly.
Nicely written and lots of scope for role reversal or Mike getting deeper in the mire.

A sequel...

A nice sequel or follow up would be an interesting idea. She further humiliates and degrades her husband. We suffer along with him. The story asserts he is employed as a school teacher. He meets someone who initiates a relationship with him. He is slowly lured in a different direction; he suffers at home, but at work his self-esteem is regularly restored. Slowly he becomes less the pathetic pleading husband and more like a roommate with his wife. She notices, investigates and tries to restore the old balance. The husband, though still essentially passive with his new love interest at work becomes something of a prize. On one side there's a wife who wants to keep her pathetic husband. On the other side there's a love interest who is engaged in rebuilding his manhood. Who wins? Does the weak husband stay the subservient. Does he begin to assert himself? Then the new love interest announces that she is pregnant with his child. His paternal instincts begin to kick in. He decides the best thing is to leave his wife, take their kids with him, and start over with the new woman. What will the wife do? Will she fight? Will she try re-emasculation as her primary tool? Will the new love interest prop up the husband until he's fully recovered from his 'cuckold disease'? Think of the fun you could have writing something like that.

Just think you could take this fundamentally worthless plot-less story that contains the ingredients of your fantasies of submission, and turn into a story with some real tension. Why don't you try it?

A story about a marriage without love...

A story about a marriage without love...And the author said in the prologue that "She appears to have feelings for her husband"...what feelings? contempt? In another part the husband thought: "What could he do if she was the bread winner?" But soon we found he worked too: "because he had some papers from school to mark". And finally she admitted she loved her boss, and wasn't going to stop seeing him. Was the boss married and her being married a way to protect him? So a story with no love in it, no respect, and a whore wife that whores herself to go up in her career!!!

Wrong category

1*

Fetish

# 1

My 2 Cents

the author delivered as promised - another useless cuck story. Carvohi the only way your sequel will be done is if you do it. The author is an admitted and proud cuck. He sees no problem with story. He nor his characters will ever change

A True Cuckold Relationship

As a cuckold wannabe, I thoroughly enjoyed reading about Mike's total submission to devote his energy honoring his wife's wish to be sexual happy. I am sure he would cum while cleaning her, as a good cucky should. Jimmy

Cut and Paste from the Cuck Handbook

Nothing original Just formulaic non erotic drivel. Been done to often 1

Thanks for the warning.

Didn't read this, but wouldn't have anyway. I just look at the scores, the tags and off I go. Yea, loving wives is really turning into a wimpy cuckold category. Too bad.

Not sure if you cut this comment or I failed to post it properly

This story is much more palatable if I put myself in Stewarts bed then Mikeys.

You're right.....

...total shit.
Really, after finding a much more palatable mate, why would she bother to come home to cucky...except to abuse him? She must be that sick, to take pleasure in treating someone else so badly. And he must be that sick, to stay on and take it.
Yup, I truly do loathe your work.

Thank you

Thank you all for your feedback. I must be doing something right to elicit all this emotion. This is actually based on a true story which clearly disturbs a lot of you.

carvohi, your alternative ending is great. Thank you for writing it. I'm pretty sure real life is not going to end that way. Mike lets her walk all over him and I don't see that stopping, but hey, who knows...

This story is exquisite! Don't mind about all the negative comments, you'll always get those - some people seem to live to level vitriolic criticism, nothing positive!
Very well written, obviously from the aspect of a very conversant cuckold. Want to talk about your 'real life' experiences with me? pm me and we'll talk.

Enjoyed!

Deep down, many men love the submission but fight with themselves about it, but deep down, like Mike, they know they will readily submit time and time again.

I liked the story. You should just ignore the negative comments.

Non Erotic

Sorry sub humiliation particularly by someone who claims to love you is just not erotic

Read your profile

You are living the cuckold dream. Short of her putting you in chastity and having you service her hot stud lover by sucking his cock, cleaning his cock and balls, and swallowing loads from his huge balls. Pretty good story and you did get your treat at the end. Hope she puts you in chastity to control your little tiny man.

hot

This is the hottest female protagonist ever. And Indian makes too sweet. Burned in the fires of Kali is every man's secret desire, even these pathetic misogynist idiots who endlessly spew drivel in these forums.

Disgusting story of abuse

You wouldn't treat your dog this badly. And if your friends and family discovered your behavior no one would ever talk to you again. What a cunt.

Deserves 6 stars!

You are the heir to Miguel Cervantes. Don't let anyone tell you any different.