The Editor

Loved this story, whether loaded with bull or not. ;-)

Bless You!

I look for your stuff on here all the time. You have made my summer. I'm old too, I like to read wonderful erotica that's written well. I get it. Keep up the good work.

A New Quest!

Look @ what you did! Now I have to scour my supermarkets to find their broom closets. With any luck I could meet a Julie also....

Loved this story!

Garbage Anon

Do we tell Garbage Anon that when we find a good story someone like him has trashed, we vote higher for it?
Not that Dreamcloud's work isn't usually worth five.
Nice story. I edit. Will it come true for me?

Nice meta

A cool story in a story- very clever. I wonder if a leg up on a shoulder would fall asleep? I confess I haven't explored all the various odd positions and I feel sadly left out.

Fabulous, deserves 8* at least.

CHEARS!

Laughed and got hard at the same time. Five stars.

***

Nice. Now you have my comment and my thanks for your endless ego. Keep writing.

Cute, clever, and compelling.

But how could they end it there? Answer, they didn't. And you don't have to write that story. It writes itself, in our heads. Really, very profound, when you think about it.

Insanely funny

Damn, you done wright gud.

I like the way your mind works, thanks for sharing your incredible talent. Ever thought about e-book publishing?

With a few more good lines, this could have been posted in humor...

And that is a good thing! Well done -- creative, clever, erotic, and funny.

Oh maaaaaaaan!

Is this wish fulfillment or did it really happen? Oh wow. I was left speechless. Honestly. Oh wooooow. Hot and incredibly funny. Wow. Just...wow.

Lol, all that aside, I'm a grammar Nazi too but I can let simple things slide if the story is really worth it. Yours are :) Happy eating, DreamCloud's ego!

Lovelots, HunterChic1807 xoxo

Damn you, DreamCloud...

....My bloated ego refuses to allow any editor near my precious pose and poesy. And here you go, tormenting me with my failure to interface with a sexy proofreader, so willing to contribute to my bottom line.

Cute and Hot

Just how I like my women. Again, not at all what I was expecting. I love the way your mind works so I had to read your Bio. Your words about finding passion is right on. It's probably that philosophy that makes your stories so appealing and endearing. Don't change a thing. Thanks for the entertainment.

Love it ^^

Haha I just love the little semi-autobiographic story :)
I think you really should consider going for longer stories to get published, it's just to good for "only" internet stuff!

Hilarious!

I can't say I'd go for the position, although the closet with no lock sounds just fine. The self-deprecation counterbalanced male ego in a very satisfying way. You might've pleased all of the people all of the time!

Grammar Is Sexy

Next time, send your stories to me. Proper grammar and syntax will improve your short stories tremendously.

I like

Not what I expected. Much better in fact. I love how you can't tell where reality ends and fantasy begins... or if there's even a "fantasy" at all.

i love it

Very creative!

Entertaining...

or better yet, quite humorous. After a coincidental meeting, fantasy turned into reality. True or not, it's the stuff great stories are made of.

Now that the writer and editor have coupled, dotting the "i's" and crossing the "t's" should be much easier. Dangling the participles and splitting the infinitives ought to be a piece of cake.

Thanks for posting your story. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

nice story

You make the transition between reality and fiction seamless. For all I know, the only reality may be that you got older in June! lol

Priceless

You are so damn good!

and this is why you have "a leg up"

on most of the other writers on this site.

great job playing with the wall between writer and reader

Research, research, research...

Nothing like research to make a story believable. 😁😁😁

Thanks

Thanks for the smiles. A little truth and a little humor helps to brighten one's day. BK

Great story!

I loved it.

Funniest thing I ever read at L. But you still need an editor. Who cares?

Yes, Editor is the funniest. But the stories I read before, Link and Pieces among them, still need an editor. Me? Who knows. But what does "needs" mean? If L doesn't care, why should you? spellos, typos, grammos. But never mind. I'd be surprised if yours aren't the most favorite ROMANCES at L. They're mine.