you must write the next chapter soon , i have to read it ,please .
...this is a great start!
need more!
If there is a next chapter, I will read it However judging from this one I am not holding out much hope.
I gave this a 4 for a interesting and well-written start... Look forward to seeing what you do with it.
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you must write the next chapter soon , i have to read it ,please .
Looking forward to more...
...this is a great start!
loveeee
need more!
A 2 STAR STORY
If there is a next chapter, I will read it However judging from this one I am not holding out much hope.
Not sure what "2-star" is talking about
I gave this a 4 for a interesting and well-written start... Look forward to seeing what you do with it.
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