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and then he comes back to find her and the baby dead so he takes the boys with him
Hopefully he finds what he is looking for
You're a cheerful chap redlion......
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Ok im hooked! Im going to have to read more of this. No reason he cant go on to Evansville( which is just some 40 minute drive from my house) then come back for her and the boys and take them home with him.
I'm hooked
Great writing can't wait for the next installment. 5*
Great stuff!
Like others...I'm hooked.
Redlion...your outlook on things seems a bit bleak. Let's hope it's not true.
C
You now have me hooked DreamCloud. This is well written, intriguing with a killer 'hero' who has a rigid sense of right/wrong. Not with his job, but with himself. Good job making him a likeable guy. Do we get to see what made him this way? Or just enjoy the journey
Amazing. Absolutely Amazing.
Great writing DC. I'd expand more on the Amazing part but I've got to save some superlatives for the later chapters. If I could rate 7 or 8 stars...
curiouser and curiouser
with each layer being revealed
Even better
than I remembered.
Just Found this Gem.
Great story; great characterization. Just gets more absorbing as it goes.
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