The Job Pt. 03

I see how you do it.....you take a deep-down nice guy, give him an out of society norm job, add in some well written, hot sex...and it equals wonderful story that pulls people in. Genius, pure genius.

Keep on going!

You are doing great. Keep it going.

Still loving it...

Can't wait for the other chapters.

Thanks again for the story and for all that you have written.

C

I dunno?

Leaving Marissa and the boys in the same area as Kyle....seems kinda reckless. Jayden should remember the old saw. "Never leave an enemy alive behind you."
Kyles bottled courage will come back real fast once he realizes Jayden is gone.

Uplifting

Everyone needs a good story with a good ending. I can visualize the big old house just dying to be filled up with a family again- seen many just like it. Now I'm worrying about whether the garage will survive- I was imagining that Jayden would somehow throw some advantage their way, but leaving things uncertain and untidy is more like real life anyhow. Keep writing such excellent stories!

One Third

yes you are right but don't burst the balloon!

Three Sweet Little Treasures

I would love to have three little boys like these.

a kind hearted

hit man?

hrmmm

Is it bad that he has turned into John Wick in my head?

hhhhhhhhh...

J is one interesting contractor

This guy's a professional killer??

I really like this story, I like the characters in it, and I like where it's going. It's fun. I also understand that for whatever future reason, Jayden's going to need this VERY specific skill set. Interesting way for him to have those skills, but buying into his behavior with Marissa is pretty tough.

I'll stay tuned, I'm interested in where this goes...

This is

one of my favorite chapters.

Hooked.

Very anxious to see where this unique story and character are headed.

Namesakes

Wow, that's amazing ... my daughter has two sons. Their names are Sebastian and Xavier ... spooky! Good story so far, not sure where it is going, but bound to be gripping!

First Move

While Marissa obviously shouldn't "jump his bones," there will likely be an opportunity, maybe while watching a movie, where she could snuggle up to him!