The Job Pt. 04

Nice twist thrown in this morning. And the tension bumps up several levels. Nicely done.

Loving It!

So very captivating. Great charecter development and motivation. Looking forward to where this is headed. Finding it difficult to wait for new chapters.

Outstanding

Your character development paints a clear picture in my mind's eye. Moreover, I like your characters; which is an absolute necessity for me to enjoy the story. It also helps to have such a great plot! 5 stars.

Still great...

Loving this series!

Sad to lose the mum though...

C

Wow! This is excellent!

Each chapter gets better. These characters are very fascinating.

each chapter is so different

so too are the women

Great story so far!

Wild ride so far

I have never commented before finishing a story, but I am enjoying this so much that I though I should. I am quite amazed at where this story has gone so far and I am sure that Jayden is going to end up with someone at the end. I thought I knew who at the beginning but now I am not so sure.

Yoshi

I forgot

how good this story really is. Been a while since I last read it.

Absorbing Story.

Exciting also. No idea how this will end, but hoping for the best for these characters.