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Sweet, lovely chapter (especially because Kyle gets his ass kicked). Marissa and the boys find love and a home. You know the boys now have everything in place to grow up to be good men. My only problem with it is.....I get that Doug is horribly shy. I get he has no experience with sex. But to have a boob put in his face and him have no clue what to do with it? Seriously?! Where did this man grow up?! On a deserted island with no human interaction?
This Is Delightful
A very tender and loving chapter. It's sentimental, but not sappy. Happiness for ordinary nice people. Well done.
Great Story
I have been loving reading you story This chapter was another great on and has me anxiously looking forward to the next one. Thanks for submitting it.
Ted
Wow
I have never read a more beautifully written love story.
beautiful
that was romantic
well done
wOw
All of my favourite stories are written by you, but THIS chapter reached a whole new level. Best 25 minutes of my reading life, better than Wilbur, more good feelings Then of a Dickens. I just dont know what to say :D ty vm from norway
You
can create characters that LIVE. You craft your stories with love. They are beautiful and terrifying and, ultimately, satisfying.
Yes.
So glad for Marissa. Now for the others in this little story jewel.
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