It’s a Brave New World Ch. 01

must continue!

You have piqued my interest!

Moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore!

:D Yep. More.

Do it

Do it again
Maybe he should knock on a friends door...or check his bank account?

could have been longer to explain the set up or maybe he is still passed out dreaming this crap.

you've got my attention

I'm interested to see where you go with this. The start didn't really give the reader much to go on where this story is going but it also leaves you a lot of room to expand it. I look forward to seeing where u go with this

ok ...you got me too...

just like the others commentors here...so....we'll just wait for the next chapter and see where this will be going...

And you hooked another.

just like the other posters, i to am hooked, and can't wait for the next chapter. I agree that this intro could have been a bit longer, and include some of the explanation, but it does give you a bit of time to flesh out any little quirks you might want to include in this universe.

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Not a fan of pubic hair, good story though=]