interesting opening and I like the premise of your story. Next chapter I would suggest you deal with how you're going to get him in this thing in the first place, but very promising opening.
This is an interesting start to a story. Will Anne and Sandra be included in all of these future stories? Hmm. I am very interested to see where this may go. Keep writing sweetie and we shall see what comes next.
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Anonymous03/24/15
common!
I like charity stories but im sorry this is just not anywhere near believable. Even a guy who has charity desires is not going to agree to go from no chastity to I'm going to be a whore and your locked up for the next 20 years. At least give the ladies some finesse to take him down that rabbit hole.
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interesting start.
interesting opening and I like the premise of your story. Next chapter I would suggest you deal with how you're going to get him in this thing in the first place, but very promising opening.
Excellent?
I like your thinking, please write more.
hmmmm, Anne.
This is an interesting start to a story. Will Anne and Sandra be included in all of these future stories? Hmm. I am very interested to see where this may go. Keep writing sweetie and we shall see what comes next.
common!
I like charity stories but im sorry this is just not anywhere near believable. Even a guy who has charity desires is not going to agree to go from no chastity to I'm going to be a whore and your locked up for the next 20 years. At least give the ladies some finesse to take him down that rabbit hole.
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