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Don't need a second chapter.
This piles the shit deep enough.
Same old gay husband crap old women dreaming of being a whore stuff
# 1
So far...
...there is nothing to differentiate this story from all the other wife-sharing tales. I'd like to see this story go in an unexpected direction in future chapters. Maybe the husband gets jealous and asks his wife to stop, but it's too late; she's addicted to young cock. Maybe hubby gets some action with a young co-ed while wifey is fucking another stud. Maybe the daughter walks in while mommy is fucking her boyfriend and daddy is jerking off in the corner, and embarasamwnt and hilarity ensues.
I don't know. Something to break the usual paint-by-numbers storyline.
Wrong category
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What he should have said...
He said: "Renee has always been faithful to me throughout our marriage." But What he should have said was: "I think Renee has always been faithful to me throughout our marriage."..that's two different things...
get right to it
Very straight to the point, but not my cup of espresso.
Age is a wonderful modifier
patience is what it take to make a great trip
45 and looks 25?
Come on, that is too unrealistic and then to be told to pick up as many guys as she wants?
Ugh. This is a disaster story, not a stroke story.
You, like all writers....
...ask us to suspend belief long enough to engage us in your story....OK, fine....but then your half of the arrangement is to make a story rationally believable long enough to justify our suspense of belief.
When you get so far, that fast, you ruin the mutual agreement by taking it well out of bounds too soon. Hubby just up and decides to "let the bulls in" on a lark, taking advantage of their next trip out of town to set his long-restrained wife out for the week.
Who is going to believe that, "I know she's been faithful...", when with what appears to be scant hesitation, she almost bolts into wanton, rampant sex with a young man, with no holding back? That just doesn't seem anywhere near normal, unless, of course, she's just doing openly what she's already been doing secretly for years.
Sounds like now that hubby is on board, it's OK to return to being a public slut.....because it seems she never stopped being one at all.
Oh, and BTW, your daughters are both sluts and you should be OK with that, since I am one, too.
Really? We're supposed to suck that up? After, years of loving faithfulness? There are too many poor conveniences and your story very quickly takes on the tenor of a teenage stroke fantasy, not much of a story at all.
"Ooo, baby, you fucked me so good 4 times last night and my hubby was thrilled!" After 22 years of faithful monogamy? No. Damn. Way.
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