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Tammy and the Soccer Team

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by Anonymous

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by strictmaster12880SWB09/20/14

Title made no sense

Where is the "team"? Is this being continued? Otherwise, it should be called "Soccer Teammate"

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by Anonymous09/20/14

Great start hope there is part 2

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by Anonymous09/20/14

Grammar

The story has some hot elements, but the mixed tenses and pronouns are a little distracting.

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by Anonymous11/02/14

waiting

where is chapter 2.

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