As the last commenter said, your writing reads like poetry, capturing a moment in time where through your excellent descriptions, the reader can almost feel their own senses light up. The feel of the clips, the taste of their fluids on his cock...it's all quite potent. They clearly have a long and deep history, and I look forward to more pieces of their past being revealed.
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Anonymous09/22/14
Simply Wonderful!
Your writing is simple, in the most beautiful way, and you paint a picture very well. As everyone else has said, it reads like poetry! I am curious to find out more about our couple here, as it is quite obvious they have a lot of love and trust with one another. Can't wait for your next update!
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Poetry. .... you have class and style in your writings
Beautiful
As the last commenter said, your writing reads like poetry, capturing a moment in time where through your excellent descriptions, the reader can almost feel their own senses light up. The feel of the clips, the taste of their fluids on his cock...it's all quite potent. They clearly have a long and deep history, and I look forward to more pieces of their past being revealed.
Simply Wonderful!
Your writing is simple, in the most beautiful way, and you paint a picture very well. As everyone else has said, it reads like poetry! I am curious to find out more about our couple here, as it is quite obvious they have a lot of love and trust with one another. Can't wait for your next update!
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