Not Quite Sleeping Ch. 02

A good follow-up

This was a pretty well written second part. My only complaint was that the sex was very short once the mom found out the son wasn't asleep.

Keep writing!

Liked it. Wished the "awake" sex was longer. Now to get sis involved.

Yea, I probably should have extended that last part. But I am going to pick up on some of that in the next, and then figure out how to include the sister. I'm probably going to end the series at the third one. Perhaps make it a little longer though.

Anyway, hope you like it.

good job

I like the story, though like the others, and you yourself, I woulkd have like the "awake" scenes to be longer. And definitely include the sister. After all. Mom licked all of her own aftermath up to get rid of the evidence, so she's certainly not averse to the the taste.

Very good

So far I'm really liking this series. To me it's well written and I like the characters, the only thing I didn't like, spoiler for anyone that hasn't read it yet, was the ending. It was the first time they where "awake" and willing partners and, to me, a memorable occasion so I think it shoulda had more detail to it. Other than that love the series and can't wait for more.

keep the chapters coming and i think he will get to fuck his sister too

A good story

From what I've read, mom seems to be the possessive type of woman, and it will be hard for her to share him with her daughter, but I think it's time for him to move into his mom's bedroom so they can fuck anytime they want to.

Ended wrong

Sister should have walked in on them and he found out that she had been also using him along with his mother as he had never seen her body before now.
Now all three are in bed together.

Mom's statement

Statement not lost on me "Lying to me and your sister"

great story

write more like it. continue with your sister

Nice work!

There's gotta be more! Hope you continue with more chapters

Do not rush to end this.

I am sure that if you give it some time to brew in your mind you could get two or three more chapters. Maybe mom lets his sister know that he has been faking his sleep disorder, then offers to "devise" an appropriate way for him to "apologize" to her. Maybe have their mom let her daughter have some alone time with him, to "punish" him, and get her "apology" from him. Then have the "family time" by the sixth chapter. Basically, I do not want to see you force an end to this series as they are usually not satisfying to most readers.

Some of the best bantering and fun I've read in a long time

This should be a very, very popular and well read story here and we hope it will become longer and lots more involved. Congratulations on a great story written well and entertaining....

unbelievable!

great dialogue and hot action, but nobody could expect their son to eat pussy for hours and be asleep. still gave you 5 stars though. hope sis gets involved too.

An excellent if somewhat fantastic story

I loved the heat in your sex scenes and the sexual frustration in their daily interactionss. There were a couple of spelling errors that took me out of it, specifically after their jog. Other errors were pretty minor mainly the using "of" instead of "off" or something similar. I look forward to reading more of your work be it this story or something else.

me too

I love it when a mother and son are so free and easy with each other that they can engage in dirty joking and banter. The boy will say, "hey, mom, is that the same hairy hole I came out of?" And she'll reply, "sure is, it's your own birth canal, and you're welcome to revisit it any time you want." Or the kid'll say, "mommy, I gotta blow my balls. Okay if I do it up your cunt?" And his mother will reply, "of course, that's what my cunt is for, baby boy." A boy's penis and his mother's vagina--made for each other.

This would have been more fun if he'd never admitted to pretending to be asleep, and MOM being caught by Daughter... then Daughter wanting some ALONE time with her loving (but sleeping) brother... then sis bring the secret to share him with some of her hot friends?

How about re-writing this story, with such a plot? Call it differently... but yet, similar so we know it to be "the same plot gimick"? :)

Ironically, I kind of expected the story to go like animal99 wrote, had it lined up in my head... So should be interesting to see how things differ!
Interesting so far though! Hey, maybe brother should sleepwalk into sisters room naked with wood and get in bed with her, hehehe ;)
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..I didn't masturbate that day, and I pretty much never did anymore, even though I really wanted to right then. I felt like abstaining improved my endurance for our nightly sessions. Luckily, mom showed up as usual.

@@@ ...no, jacking off improves endurance, duh! @@@

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Could of had him pretend to still be sleeping, and just acting out a dream...

He could have flipped her on her back, put her ankles behind her neck, and fucked her pussy, ass, and mouth (in that order) like she was a cheap whore...

Fucked her until she couldn't move, then keep her pinned under him until morning, pretend to wake-up and catch her in the act... then he would be in control of their relationship...